英语作文 假如你是李华 你的好朋友苏丹前不久 随父母去了美国他写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活

1. 英语作文 假如你是李华 你的好朋友苏丹前不久 随父母去了美国他写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活

Dear Su Dan:

     I have heart that you had been in America with you parents.But I‘m sorry to heart that you couldn't adapt to the life in America.So,here is some of my suggestions.First,you are supported to learn English well so that you can make communication with foreign better.Second,you have to make some friends because friendship can make you forget loneliness.Last but not least,you can take part in all kinds of activities,which will make you life more interesting.
                                                                                                                             Yours,
                                                                                                                             Li Hua

2. 假如你是李华,Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是

     Dear Jane,How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Xiaohua          试题分析：本文是一篇开放作文，给李华写一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受，并没有给出什么要点要求学生结合滋生的实际情况写作，在行文中，要注意多用些高级句型和词汇，我们可适当增加连贯词，以使行文连贯。范文中就使用了合理的连词和较高级的语法结构，使文章结构严谨，增色不少。写作亮点：I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me.和The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.这两句，使文章浑然一体。同时文章中使用了适当的连词，使用文章结构严谨，浑然一体。点评：书面表达中的写信类作文，我们首先要完整的正确的表达出所有的写作要点。在写作中，如果语言基础好的话，多用较高级语法结构，这样可以使文章增色不少。同时要合理的使用适当的连词，这样文章才能结构严谨，浑然一体。    

3. 假如你是李华，在美国留学。你母亲今天下午要从国内来看你，但你凑巧要去做个讲座，故给你的朋友Peter留

     范例：SundayPeter,　　I am very glad that my mother is coming this afternoon by air. But I have to give a lecture and have no time to meet her. I am writing to ask you to meet my mother at the airport at 3:30 for me. As you have never seen her before, I will say something about her to help you recognize her. She is around sixty years old, fat and short, with a long face and gray hair. I have been told she is dressed in a white blouse and brown trousers and she will take a yellow suitcase with her. 　　I will be thankful to you for your help.　　                                                      Yours, Li Hua         略    

4. 假如你是李华,写信告诉你远在美国的朋友Jane关于你家乡的巨大变化

dear jane
   how is going about you? Many years ago you came to my hometown found that it is very poor and the environment is very bad,garbage was everywhere.but now I will happy to tell you that my hometown is not derty any more,it have a big change.
  first,the factory  made the air pollut is dispeer,people grow many trees an the mountain,now it is very beautiful. second,penople did not get the strang ill any more,and they lived happely.the more important is people's aware of protect the environment is strengthen,they will more love our hometown than befor.
  Wherecome you to comeback to visit my hometown,you will amarze the change of it. I wlii waiting for your coming.
                                                                                                                  Yours LliHua

 这个对付高中作文应该是没问题了，但是希望你以后能自己多练习，老师留作业的目的是提高你的能力 而不是应付交差哦 最后会害了自己
要把作文分拿高 你可以把我写的一些词语换掉 例如 people 有很多可以代替的 村民 什么的 这样会提高你的作文质量 字要写工整也很重要 加油。

5. 假如你是小华, Jane是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是

     Dear Jane, How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.Give my best regards to your parents and I am looking forward to your visiting my school next year.Yours sincerely,Xiaohua         试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求给Jane写一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。内容包括： 1.新学校的生活、学习情况与感受。2.表达对她父母的问候，并请她明年来你校看看的愿望。要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【亮点说明】范文语言简洁，要点全面， 词组有：keep fit.保持健康，do more exercise多锻炼， Give my best regards to代某人向…问好， look forward to 盼望，句式多变：I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. 这句话用不定式， The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.这句话用了宾语从句。    

6. 书面表达 假如你是李华 最近刚从网上认识了一个英国朋友Alice. 请你根据要点提升给她写一封120～150...

Dear Alice,

how is going? i feel depress about my English study in recently, could you give me some help? the first one is i think English words hard to remember,and easy to forget it,even i work so hard  particular some similar words always make me confuse. The second on is the grammar, i am not good to understand of English grammar, bacause it is much differerent between Chinese and English, as well as sentence structure , when i do some exersices  it also made mistakes. The last one is my English pronunciation is not standard,i do not dare speak English, because i worry about being ridiculed. i think it is a vicious circle.

thanks for understanding
best regrads.

xx

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7. 美国朋友Jane 在中国过了两年， 即将回国。 假定你是李华，现在由你给她写封信，邀请她星期六晚上来你家

     Dear Jane,Your letter reached me yesterday. I’m very glad you are doing so well in your studies. Congratulations on your passing all the exams. How do you enjoy your years in China? You have really made such rapid progress that it often sounds that you were a Chinese girl. We are proud of you. And we all appreciate your help with our English. We will always remember the picnics, outgoings, get-togethers and the wonderful time we spent together. What a pity you have to go back so soon. We’re going to have a party at my place this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00?We’ll have dinner together. Yours Li Hua         试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件，邀请她参加欢送会。文章的要点都已经给了出来，考生发挥的余地较小，只需要翻译成英语即可，写作的时候要把所有的要点都包括在内，不要遗漏。同时注意使用被动语态，倒装句等不同的句式，让文章充满变化，不要那么的死板。同时要使用高级的词汇和词组提高文章的档次。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如do well in，congratulations on，make rapid progress，be proud of，What a pity，go back；并注意了句子的衔接如and，such … that …等等。    

8. 英语作文假如你是李华，转学的烦恼给苏珊写邮件？

dear susan I'm li Hua, how are you getting on these days? I'm very miss you after I transfer to another school[转学】.I'll never forget when I get into trouble ,you helped me and told me not to give up. I am so bad in English ,you konwn. And now I find it more difficult in English. l have touble in my lessons. And because l'm new here , l don't have any close friends , l'm very lonely. And l don't like there's food and whether. best whishes!,9,英语作文假如你是李华，转学的烦恼给苏珊写邮件 
  讯问近况，表达思念，不习惯饮食和天气，听课有困难，没有朋友，感到孤独